Comments on: Landscapes That Resist Fire http://www.mylandscaping-tips.com/365/landscapes-that-resist-fire/ Beautify with landscaping Sat, 01 Oct 2011 07:16:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.2 By: Atif Mirza http://www.mylandscaping-tips.com/365/landscapes-that-resist-fire/comment-page-1/#comment-2074 Atif Mirza Thu, 04 Mar 2010 23:04:59 +0000 http://www.mylandscaping-tips.com/365/landscapes-that-resist-fire/#comment-2074 Good Effort. Sensitivity prevails in your thoughts. You have an eye over the life. I felt the brilliant thought provoking word in your poem.<br><b>References : </b><br>I'm also peot of Urdu Language. Good Effort.
Sensitivity prevails in your thoughts.
You have an eye over the life.
I felt the brilliant thought provoking word in your poem.
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I’m also peot of Urdu Language.

]]> By: Sage http://www.mylandscaping-tips.com/365/landscapes-that-resist-fire/comment-page-1/#comment-2073 Sage Thu, 04 Mar 2010 23:02:59 +0000 http://www.mylandscaping-tips.com/365/landscapes-that-resist-fire/#comment-2073 I really like your poem! I had to read it again, very profound. You are gifted in your insight and I believe destined to write great things. Don't quit, the talent is there. Good work!<br><b>References : </b><br> I really like your poem! I had to read it again, very profound. You are gifted in your insight and I believe destined to write great things. Don’t quit, the talent is there. Good work!
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]]> By: Tiki http://www.mylandscaping-tips.com/365/landscapes-that-resist-fire/comment-page-1/#comment-2072 Tiki Thu, 04 Mar 2010 18:00:40 +0000 http://www.mylandscaping-tips.com/365/landscapes-that-resist-fire/#comment-2072 <b>Anyone read the short story "Dark They Were, And Golden Eyed"? I need an opinion on my poem.?</b><br>Dark they were and golden eyed Identities lost dreams will die Settlers from earth they once were til the harsh Martian clime took its toll. Unsure nervous they came to this place, Looked with eager eyes at the rough landscape, Change the names of our ancient domains then tremble in fear in the darkness. The one called Bittering had a brave heart tried to bring back a lost art. Convince the others to resist he wanted to Only he realized what was Happen ing. Our sun A merciless ball of fire Burned their skin til its brown as earth. Eyes that shimmer like stunning sapphires And are filled with joyful mirth. Five years later the rocket returns to rescue their poor colonists. They find naught but an empty town Remains of a once great empire. Hidden in the purple hills In houses of blue marble majesty dark skinned people are living in peace. Blissfully ignorant of reality. Anyone read the short story "Dark They Were, And Golden Eyed"? I need an opinion on my poem.?
Dark they were
and golden eyed
Identities lost
dreams will die
Settlers from earth they once were
til the harsh Martian clime took its toll.

Unsure
nervous they came to this place,
Looked with eager eyes at the rough landscape,
Change the names of our ancient domains
then tremble in fear in the
darkness.

The one called Bittering had a brave heart
tried to bring back a
lost art.
Convince the others to resist he wanted to
Only he realized what was
Happen
ing.

Our sun
A merciless ball of fire
Burned their skin til its
brown as earth.
Eyes that shimmer like stunning sapphires
And are filled with joyful mirth.

Five years later
the rocket returns
to rescue their poor colonists.
They find
naught but an empty town
Remains of a once great empire.

Hidden in the purple hills
In houses of blue marble majesty
dark skinned people are living
in peace.
Blissfully ignorant of reality.

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